Writing Workshop · First Pages · Zoom

The first pages
decide everything.

Publishers, agents, readers — everyone decides in the first few minutes whether to keep reading. In this small workshop session you get professional feedback on the opening of your novel and find out where you really stand.

€39 per spot
3 spots max.
90 min via Zoom
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What happens in the workshop?

Up to three novelists bring the opening of their manuscript: up to five standard pages, all genres. Everyone reads all texts in advance. During the Zoom session we discuss together what's working and what isn't.

A trained eye can already see, in the first pages, what a novel is capable of — and what it's missing. You receive the reactions of the other readers, and my professional assessment: Does the text grab? Are tone, characters, and entry point working? What promise does the novel make in these opening pages?

This is also an orientation exercise. Many writers wonder whether they're ready for a full editorial assessment. In the workshop you get an honest answer: Is the manuscript already on the right track, or is there something that needs to be resolved first? A good editorial costs real money. This workshop can tell you whether the moment for it has arrived.

What you get concretely

Who gives the feedback?

Dr. Jürgen Fauth – Story Mentor and Editor
Dr. Jürgen Fauth

Story mentor and editor with over 25 years of experience in literature and film. PhD in Creative Writing, published author, former film critic for the New York Times. For over 25 years I've worked with writers on their stories — in Berlin, New York, and online.

What others say

"The StoryFlow workshop was enormously enriching. In a short time I had several genuine aha-moments and gained new, clear perspectives on my own story."
Kerstin Eilers, Author
"It helped me see exactly where I was stuck. A meaningful tool for understanding where you stand and finding the lever to move forward."
Teresa Plate, Author
"Working with Jürgen Fauth allowed me to see my novel project with fresh eyes. His notes were genuinely helpful and opened up aspects I hadn't considered."
Dorrit Bartel, Author

Reserve your spot

Tell me briefly what you're working on: genre, how far along you are, and what you're hoping to get from the session. I'll get back to you within 24 hours with confirmation and next steps.

€39 per spot · max. 3 participants · text length up to 5 standard pages (approx. 1,500 words) · All genres · Payment by bank transfer after confirmation · English · Zoom